First of all I'd like to give a few words to the last reviewer called "banzay". So, you have a damaged monitor (Or moniter as you like to call it), and it's "darker than usual". Is this the flash author's fault? I think not. You do not like horror movies? Tough luck. As for the sound, I do think this particular track from .hack//sign's soundtrack fits this animation like a glove. Missing sound effects? Asshats. It does not truly need sound effects; the silence is more becoming of this moody clip. Graphics? Ye gods, the graphics were excellent! Alot of work had been put into them, to be sure. Overall a very fine animation.
This rare reviewer-bashing review was brough to you by Micromus.
Where's the point? One shouldn't send in his practising-pieces, only serious flashes. Keep that kind of clips in your own harddrive only, this way you're just wasting people's time.
I can see that you really tried with the graphics, but they could, however, be better. But I'm hoping you'd watch the grammar - every character sounds like a 10-year old little boy. Kuja's Theme suits the little clip.
oh well personal im disabled thats why my grammer is messed. only joking, however the start of the grammer is near enuff the same as any other ff speaking while in dreams, the other short bits were so short :P maybe thats why they sound like a 10 yr old's grammer, and the graphics could have been beta yes, but they r better now....p.s. i love u , good day 2 You.
It's great, just some constructive feedback: The sounds could have been a little more carefully chosen, especially the "new level"-sound was kind of.. annoying :p And as for movement, the little coffee addict goes a tad too fast. Also some polishment to the graphics, and it would be even better =)
I'll see if I can do something like that.
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